How to write better books by John Westermann 

bulletWrite a story as if you are telling it to someone you love to entertain.
bulletOutline if you can (Writing is architecture).
bulletPut as much of the good stuff as you can upfront (Pack your beginning with enough tension and suspense).
bulletEdit ruthlessly.
bulletWhen you work from real life, adjust those vividly remembered scenes to the demands of the story's structure.
bulletChoose mere mortals as characters.
bulletBuild worthy opponents for your heroes, not straw men.
bulletTry to see every scene from the viewpoint of each character in it.
bulletPractice empathy. Even sympathy. If the people don't feel real, the story sounds like a lie.
bulletState your most outlandish positions boldly. Like a politician, allow no equivocation to invite reader disbelief.
bulletSkip gracefully past what you don't know (or do the research).
bulletConsider the tone of the writing (Is it appropriate to your plot and characters?).
bulletConsider the pace of the story. Spend words where they are needed. Slow down for the dramatic; whisk us through the mundane.
bulletMake your dialogue sound like real people speak.
bulletMake your ending better than your beginning. Make your middle better than both.